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You got the pant seam wrong. it doesn't go with the folds and its not the right angle with the rest of the picture.
And the blood is a couple shades too light but EVERYONE gets that wrong.
The jacket doesn't crumple up by his waist, at least not as much as its supposed to. Also, there's just something wrong with where the edge of his jacket meets the skin. Not enough shadow? Too light? I don't know. something just strikes me as off in that spot.
One more thing. May I direct your attention to his Right sleeve? The clothe seems thicker on this sleeve then on the other one...???
But all in all, besides the minor mistakes that everyone makes, its an amazing picture. The angle is real good. I like how the lighter stuff is concentrated into one spot, making it into a really strong focal point. Great job with the chains. They lead the person's (lookers? observers? Watchers?) eye toward the focal point and body of Cain.
Great work of art!
Sorry, I noticed all the comments were 'really cool' and 'its amazing'
Thought I'd give you a break and critique something and this piece of art caught my eye. I really do love it. ^^